I come from Kaohsiung and I really like Tainan, so I decide to choose the place to live.
I'm working at a department names Tony Jeans at the department sotre during my daytime.
I just write some English letters to my friends who don't live in Taiwan by email or chatting with them as well.
Before my major was fashion design.
When I graduated form college, and I chose English as my subject.
Because I know how important English is. English is very useful at companies and sometimes we have to speak in English in different situation.
In my opinion, it only takes six months to learn other skills.Yet when it comes to language, it takes a while for you to become proficient in English skills. So now I 'm here with everybody!
posted by EGG @ 5:36 AM
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Hi,
Very good!
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1.I'm come from Kaohsiung and I really like Tainan, so I decide to choose the place to live.
-->I come from
2.I'm working at department store, it named Tony jeans, during my daytime.
-->I'm working at a department names Tony Jeans at the department sotre.
3.I just write some English letters to my friends who doesen't live in Taiwan by email or chatting with them as well.
-->who don't
4.Before my major is fashion design.
-->My major was fashion design.
5.When I gradgerate form college, and choose this subject.
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-->I chose English as my subject.
6.Because I know English how important it is.English is very useful at companies and sometimes we have to speak in English depense on different situation.
-->I know how important English is.
-->speak in English in different situations.
7.In my opion, skills just need six monthes to learn.
-->opinion
-->it only takes six months to learn other skills.
But languages you can't learn it in a short time, it needs to learn for a while. So now I 'm here with everybody!
-->Yet when it comes to language, ...
-->It takes a while for you to become proficient in English skills.
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