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Wednesday, December 06, 2006

LOVE HIM, DO NOT EXPOSE HIM

Peopole said that dogs are the best friends of humans. It's very common to have a dog , and we all know that breeding a dog is a very interesting thing, but it comes with lots of responsibility in it. For example you need to have time, money ,patience and love as well.
Dog are very sensitive, no matter you are happy, angry or sad, its emotion will be affected by its master.Basically you must have time to play with him, even wash or to comb his hair. And take him a walk everyday, if you do not have time to do this, he will be very longly and the relationship between you and him will not be good.

The second part is money. Some people will think, they have money to buy a dog. But they did not take other important matters into consideration.For example, taking dogs to hospital, buying him food, and even taking a bath all cost money. That's the reason when people want to give their dog to others, they want to make sure that this new owner has a job.

And the last, the most important thing is "love". If you do not love him, you can't treat him well and it will be very afflicte with both of you. When you make up your mind to have a dog, you have to be gentle to him to teach him. Some people because of their offend to abused the dog. Abandoning dogs can cause many problems.

Finally, I just want to say :when you decide to have a dog, please give him all your love, additionally, don't forget the responsibility you have for him.

1 Comments:

At 5:22 AM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Good topic!




Some comments:


Title: Love Him, Do Not Expose Him

What do you mean by 'expose'?
--> abandon, abuse?

dog are the best friend of human
-->dogs are the best friends of humans


It's every common to have a dog , and we all know that breeding a dog is a very interesting thing, but it incoulding lots of duty in it.
-->It's very common...it includes...
--> It is better to say: it comes with lots of responsibility

For example you need have time, money ,patience and love sa well.
-->For example, you need to have time, ...as well.


Dog is very sensitive, nomatter you are happy, angry or sad, his contagion will go with host.
-->Dogs are..., no matter...
-->The word 'host' refers to someone who has guests
-->you can use the word 'master'
-->its emotion will be affected by its master

even wash or to comb for him.
-->or to comb his hair

if you do not have time to do this that he will be very longly so that the relationship between you and him will not good enough.
-->...to do this, he will be very lonely and the ...will not be good.

But they didn't all things considered that the fellow have to take the dog to the hospital and give the food even go for a bathe.
-->But they did not take other important matters into consideration. For example, taking dogs to hospital, buying him food, and even taking a bath all cost money.



Tkat's the reason some people want to gave the dog to other people to foster the puppy, but they request that the people must have a job.
-->That's the reason when people want to give their dog to others, they want to make sure that this new owner has a job.


And the last, the most important thing is "love". If you do not love him, you can't treat him good and it will be very afflicted with both of you.
-->treat him well
-->it will afflicate both ...




When you make up your mind to have a dog, you have to softly-softly to him to teach him.
-->softly??
-->be gentle?


Some people because of their offend to abused the dog.
-->Some people ??



Even they expose the dog to cause so many stray dog.
-->Abandoning dogs can cause many problems.


Finally, I just want to say :when you decide to have a dog, please give him all your love additionally don't forget the responsibility of him.
-->love, additionally, don't forget the responsibility you have for him.

 

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