Nowadays, almost every person has a cellphone. About 5 years ago it became popular and people can't live without it. Why it develop so fast in the world? Because cellphone has many advantages for example, it is very convernient; when you want to contact someone, just press the button you can easy to do that without wasting your time.Even if you want to see your family or friend, you can see each other on the video telephone. You can also leave a message if you don't want to talk, and now it's so popular to send a message to people to people during a fesitval or holiday.
Cellphone includes more and more functions, for example like camera, radio, calculating machine, alarm clock also MP3 are accessory to cellphone and it's very light to carry. You can send your photo and music by infrared port or bluetooth for free as well.Having a cellphone can save you much money to buy other products. The are a variety of cellphones, the designs allow people to show their taste and fashion, so it become an important part of our life.
posted by EGG @ 10:49 AM
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Good job!
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