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Sunday, April 01, 2007

The causes of eat too much junk food
For growing teenagers, a healthy diet is especially important. But many teenagers nowadays eat too much junk food. They like chips, coke, candy, fry chicken, etc. They think it tastes good so excess junk food, but it will causes many problems.
Junk food always consist of too much salt, sugar and calories,so that it is unheathy. If you eat too much salt or artefact, your kidney will be injured;
eating too much sugar will result in teeth dacay and get more weight; drink too much carbonic soda will result in loss of calcium; eat too much fry amylum may will lead to cancer; get too much calories who will be fat.
At the same time, many people worry about their apperence. Even though they realize that a healthy diet will keep them at a healthy weight, but some people some people choose to eat junk food after that go on a diet. Junk food tastes good and convenient, so many people like that. I think people do not need to give it up completely, but we have to have a balance on our dish so that we can diet our buds satisfy also keep healthy.

1 Comments:

At 8:48 PM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

But many teenagers nowadays are eat too much junk food.
-->delete 'are'

They think it taste good so excess junk food, but it will causes many problems.
-->it tastes...
-->excess? (can this word be used as a verb?)
-->check the use of 'excess' http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=26760&dict=CALD



your kidney will injured
--> will be injured


eat too much sugar will decay the teeth and get more weight
-->eating ...result in teeth dacay...

drink too much carbonic soda will lost calcareous
-->will result in loss of calcium

eat too much fry amylum may will leads to cancer; get too much calories will be fat.
-->will lead to...
-->(who) will be fat?



At the same time, many people worry about their apperence.

Even they realize that a healthy diet will keep them at a healthy weight, but some people rather than chooses eat junk food, after that go on a diet.
-->Even though...
-->some people choose to eat junk food after...


Junk food are taste good and convenient, so many people likes that.
-->delete 'are'
-->tastes good
-->many people like...


I think people do not need to give it up completely, but we have to keep balance on our dish so that we can satisfied our buds also keep body healthy.
--> have a balanced diet...satisfy...keep healthy

 

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