Alcoholism
Alcoholism, nowdays in Taiwan the number of alcoholic people is increasing. More and more patients go to the hosipal, it shows our concept of soical is changing.
How to judge if one is alcoholic?
1. When that you feel your drinking capacity is better and better, and then you are probably drinks a lot untill get drunk.
2.When you without drinks for a span that you can't work or to live.
3. When your family have complained your drink behavior, it's a message to you to get rid of it.
4. When you are without drinks you will feel uncomfortable of your health even shock.
People in Taiwan drink too much every day even drink to excess, even it's an illness that affects not only the physiological but also psychologic state of a person. Research in Taiwan found out the problem of alocoholism addiction problems is related to both social and cultural factors. For example, people in Taiwan drink a toast to show a men's sincerity; as a result, the number of people with this problem increases.Another reason of alcoholism is caused by physiology problem of the patient. Some people think drinking can help them forget about things that make them depressed and sad, and then drinks a lot to evade these problems. Consequently, the reason is important that cause lots of wine addiction.
posted by EGG @ 11:03 AM
1 Comments:
An interesting topic! Good analysis! Pay more attention to language expression and grammar, then your essay will read better!
Wine addiction
-->The more commonly used term is 'alcoholism'
nowdays in Taiwan wine addiction people is increasing, more and more patients go to the hosipal, it shows our concept of soical is changing.
-->The number of alcoholic peopleis increasing.
-->(Start a new sentence) More...
-->social what?
And how to judge wine addiction?
-->How to judge if one is alcoholic?
1. When you feel your drinking capacity is better and better, and then you have to drinks a lot untill get drunk.
-->When + 子句， you are probably...
2. Yon can't work or to live when you without drinks for a span.
-->when you are without ...
(complete the sentence)
3. When your family have complained your drink behavior.
(complete the sentence)
4. Feel uncomfortable of your health, even shock when you without drink, or think might be get rid of wine.
-->when you are without...,
-->or think you might be...?? What do you mean here?
People in Taiwan drink too much every day even drink to excess, it's a kind of illness that inculd not only physiology but also psychology's illness.
-->, even...
-->It's an illness that affects not only the physiological but also psychologic state of a person.
Research of Taiwan found out the wine addiction problems is concern with social culture, the social activities always like people drink a toast to show a men's sincerity, so that wine addiction is increasing.
-->Research in Taiwan...the problem of...is related to both social and cultural factors. For example, people in Taiwan drink...a man's...; as a result, the number of people with this problem increases.
Another reason is about physiology problem, some people think drink can forget about depressed or sad, and then drinks a lot to evade these problems, the reason is important that cause lots of wine addiction
-->Another reason of alcoholism is caused by psychological problems of the patient. Some people think drinking can help them forget about things that make them depressed and sad. Consequently, ...
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