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Wednesday, June 20, 2007



Pie Chart

This pie chart shows the percentage of time I spend on activities on one day.The seven main activities,chief clean up, sleeping, working, reading, dining, studying at school, and commuting, make up 100% of total. A day is divided into 24 hours. From this chart we can see I spend most of the time at work(34%), it occupies most of my day-time. Subsequently, I averaged seven hours' sleep a day; it takes up 29% of my time. It is the second longest activity after work. These two part are over 5o% of my day, and school is lesser than that, it only takes 3.5 hours per week-day(15%). Time spent on dining and cleaning up are shorter than at school, with 10 % and 6 % respectively. A little time is spent on reading and traffic as well, at only 4% and 2%.

1 Comments:

At 9:09 PM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Great job!

This pie chart shows the sum of a day how am I going to spend.
-->the percentage of time I spend on activities on one day.


The seven chief clean up, sleep, work, reading, dine, school and traffic make up 100% of total.
-->The seven main activities, cleaning up, sleeping, working, reading, dining, studying at schol, and commuting, make up...




A day divided into 24 hours, from this chart we can see I spend the most of time on my work(34%), it occupies most of my day-time.
-->A day is divided into 24 hours. From this chart, ...spend most of the time at work ...



Subsequently, I averaged seven hours' sleep a day, it occupies me 29% in a day, it's also quite a lot of time.
-->Subsequently-->Good choice of word!

-->; it takes up 29% of my time
-->It is the second longest activity after work.



These two part are over 5o% of my day, and school is lesser than that, it only spend 3.5 hours per week-day(15%).
-->. It only takes ...

句型:
Something + takes + sb + time
Sb + spend + time + on + something



Dine and clean up are less than school respective 10% and 6%.
-->Time spent on dining and cleaning up are shorter than at school, with 10 % and 6 % respectively.


A few of time may spend on reading and traffic as well, it just occupie 4% and 2% in my day.

-->A little time is spent on..., at only 4 % ad 2%.

 

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